Finish Your Book

UnknownThere is one absolute must when trying to sell your first book:  FINISH YOUR BOOK. Everything grows from there.  I do not have a magic wand that will tell you how to do this because there is no magic in doing this.  It requires sitting down and doing the work.  Write until you are sick of your own book.  Write until your brain freezes over.  Write until your fingers fall off.  WRITE UNTIL YOU ARE FINISHED. I know how difficult this is because I have been working on one novel for SIX YEARS! This does not include research.  I have stopped many times for various reasons all of which seemed really important at the time.  But now as I celebrate yet another friend’s publication of her fourth book and I am left to ponder, “What the hell are you waiting for? Finish this book!”Therefore, good readers, I am challenging you to join me in finishing our current projects by the end of the year.  We cannot sell them until we finish them so let’s finish them. I will publish a link to an excerpt of my FINISHED book on this site at the end of December and a link to any subscribed writer’s excerpt, advertisement or blurb of their finished book.  A few guidelines here:  I ACCEPT NO RESPONSIBILITY FOR PROTECTING YOUR UNCOPYRIGHTED WORK SO DON’T SEND ME LINKS TO ENTIRE BOOKS OR WORK THAT YOU HAVE NOT PROTECTED. In other words I will give you a shout out to my subscribers the rest is on you. I will give periodic updates and open my comments section so those of you who accept the challenge can give us updates, share your writer struggles and stories (as will I). This is big for me because I tend NOT to do comments.  While they are mostly great, it tends to distract you from your purpose.  Some bloggers spend more time reading their comments than blogging.

The challenge starts July 27, 2014 (mainly because I have to be in Philly for a week and will not be back until then). To those of you who want to join in, the comments section will be activated on this date. It does not only have to be a full length book.  If you are not quite at the book level in your life, commit to finishing your short story or article by the end of the year. Really finishing, research and re-writes included.

Also, one note, do not submit works in progress.  Not that kind of challenge.  Tell us the status of your work, the challenges of writing consistently, that kind of thing. Save the nuts and bolts of your work for another venue (a.k.a. NOT HERE). I will do the same.  Let’s encourage each other to hang in there and finish. And let’s finish. Take the bite, don’t take the bite but I’m finishing.  And selling.  And publishing. I’ll continue to post writer related posts along the way.  Until I’m waaaaay too busy with my book tour that is. Let’s do it! Let’s finish!

“Making art is a passion. Making a living as an artist is a business.  You have to develop your clients as much as you develop your art.”

                                         Akili Ron Anderson (visual artist)


Writing is Re-writing

The importance of the re-write cannot be overstated.  You are not “finished,” your book because you have finished the first draft. You are just through the first draft.  Writing is editing, re-choosing, re-seeing your words again….and again…and again.  Do the work to make great literature.  Many new writers are so excited when they finish the first draft.  They run around announcing to everyone who will listen (and in workshops) that they are finally finished their book.  And then they read it to you or ask you to read it and you are thinking , “what the hell?!!!”  I know the whole self-publishing explosion has given rise to many people who can afford to pay for it, having “published,” books.  But just because you can self publish your book doesn’t necessarily mean you should.  And even if you do go ahead and publish what can only be described as a first-draft, do not be so super sensitive when people do not embrace your badly written/edited book and it ends up on Amazon for a penny. I cannot repeat it enough….DO THE WORK! DO THE WORK! DO THE WORK! This will save you a lot of embarrassment when you do finally sell that first book.  Someone in the audience of your launch party will not pull out that rushed, horrible first effort you just had to “get out there,” and ask you what the hell you were thinking. You want to be considered a serious, talented writer?  Do serious/talented work.


The Great American Novel

It is always tempting to go for the “Great American Novel.”  Who doesn’t want to win a Pulitzer or a National Book Award.   But on your first book, resist the urge to write the best novel of your life and just write a good novel…a solid and complete novel. Create believable, well rounded, well developed characters who carry your story to its completion.  Avoid prologues unless they help your book.  A prologue with a long list of promises about what will happen in the novel or what is relevant in the novel and than readingimages a novel that does not keep that promise completely defeats the purpose of the prologue.  Prologues are suppose to give the reader some insight into what they are about to read.  When they don’t it  is frustrating and annoying. It also makes the writer seem incompetent and amateurish. Finish your first novel,  Edit and re-write your first novel.  Workshop it to see if readers are getting what you intend and than re-write it again.  Put in the work to complete a good solid first product.  You already have the pressure of being a first-time novelist or a beginner writer (non-fiction) to deal with.  Do not add to it by trying to  win a Pulitzer your first time out.  Yes, it could happen but it probably won’t. Your first book is your reading audience’s first impression of you…make it a good one. Save the ,”Great American Novel,” for your next book.

You Do You

27670520007205589The Fault In Our Stars by John Green, a young adult novel about teen-aged cancer victims, sold over three million print copies.  The movie is breaking box office records. The Hunger Games Trilogy by Suzanne Collins sold 27.7 million copies in 2012.  The original book, the first in the series, sold 11.7 million copies by itself. The New Yorker won the National Magazine Award for Fiction for its publication of “Brokeback Mountain” in 1998. The collection was named a finalist for the 2000 Pulitzer Prize in Fiction. The movie was nominated for eight Academy Awards.

What does this mean on a writing blog?  Simple…books are not dead and reading is not a dying art form.  Don’t listen to people who tell you your work won’t sell or is not trendy enough. Write what you love…write what you are passionate about…write a good story.  The rest will take care of its self.


Ruby Dee

I once gave Ruby Dee a booklet of my poems to read on an airplane. She was in a hurry but nonetheless, very gracious and exceedingly nice to me meaning she did not look at me like I was nuts.  I met her at a reading that John Oliver Killens had organized for our writer’s workshop. Ruby Dee could only stay for a few minutes because she had a plane to catch.  She did a dramatic reading with her husband, Ossie Davis, and then she left the room.  I followed her into the hallway.  ”Miss Dee,” I said,”Here is something for you to read on the airplane.”  And I thrust my self-published booklet of poems into her hand.  She smiled the most wonderful smile, thanked me warmly, and then she was gone.  I was sixteen years old. I met her two more times after that, both at gatherings given by John Killens, and she was always patient, warm and gracious. She spoke of human rights with such compassion but she also could hang with the other artists talking about practicing your craft as an artist. I loved those parties on Union Street in Brooklyn. Writers, actors, singers and just plain folks drinking wine and talking shit and art. The energy in the universe has shifted with your passing, Miss Dee and my heart is broken. I will forever cherish your kindness to a nervous teenager.

Born: Oct.27, 1924–Died:  June 12, 2014

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